Interesting indead, personaly im abit tired of the Goku powerup trend
but the quality was ok, i think you can grow alot if you keep practicin and animating
BTW the Kanji on his Bask is suposed to be Heaven(TEN) right bit illogical when he comes off as .. well quite evil
yeah I read somewhere that's what it meant, I was like.. whaaat... but it looks so cool!
and this was an old flash (long thought lost, but finally found), my latest is Prelude to Chaos if you wanna see some newer work :)
good for a first flash
I see potentional in your skill, youll just have to keep practicing.
evaluation, the animation can be improved and the fght setup as well
and mayeb music choise and sound. not much you can say in a stick movie really ^^
Gl with your next project
interesting but ..
Well its didnt have "IT" it lacked sence, some of the details were ok and some of the sounds but, other details were lacking like actual rates of fire and that the entire movie was like a platfrom game. Try and focus more on the story next time and maybe something thats a bit more "non linear"
other then that great progress
To many errors
The game had to many errors, for instance the sniper rifle part, that was not a barret 50. ... it was a Barrett M82A1 .50 NOT 50.
Frankly i would want to see more informational questions instead of naming stuff
I named it wrong because i thought that's what people knew it by.
And tell me the errors.
sorry didnt like this one bit
The tutorail part of NG is hard to make good, firstly the graphical part is lame and boring, the text part were you put that much text into one page and then demand us to zoom in for the text ? that is not good either. I recomend that you search for tutorials here on NG and then check out the one with the highest grade then youll see what you lack. better luck next time .. as they say third time is the charm
You almost caought the flashback feeling in the game, well i like it it was verey nice to se your work and originalety in this :P well the teqnuice you used isnt original but it was verey nicely done, i liked the Max payne story telling it added to the atmosphere, and i think you should make another game like this maybe try working on the possibilety to actually need to jump and stuff like that, maybe even get a second weapon you know.... wel nice work none the less
I liked it alot
The melody is nice and it sounds clean. Dont know what else i can say, there isnt much imo that can improve it ^^good work
Thanks =). You reviewed while I was still asleep xD.
Its an interesting piece no doubt about that. but the whole main finger play is a bit well dosnt fit in imo its abit to loud and to ... odd in comparison to the background. other then that its good
i do recognize this
it reminds me of a sing i cant remember the name but the build up is as this one soft in the begining then turning pretty rough in the end and then soft again at the end to melow out, i like it. allthough i would like to se more advanced "finger play" in the middle/end before the last soft part
A lot of music is like that, hahaha. Maybe you're thinking of the 28 Days Later theme; it's somewhat similar. I don't think a song like this should be turned into a wankfest, though. I'm finding there's a lot more emotion put into minimal pieces, so I wrote it this way.
Ah well, thanks for listening!
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