good for a first flash

I see potentional in your skill, youll just have to keep practicing.
evaluation, the animation can be improved and the fght setup as well
and mayeb music choise and sound. not much you can say in a stick movie really ^^
Gl with your next project

interesting but ..

Well its didnt have "IT" it lacked sence, some of the details were ok and some of the sounds but, other details were lacking like actual rates of fire and that the entire movie was like a platfrom game. Try and focus more on the story next time and maybe something thats a bit more "non linear"

other then that great progress

Smooth

Smooth aniimation, allthough bit repetive sometimes.
The overall quality is good and you managed to capture the song great
looking forward to more of your works

sorry didnt like this one bit

The tutorail part of NG is hard to make good, firstly the graphical part is lame and boring, the text part were you put that much text into one page and then demand us to zoom in for the text ? that is not good either. I recomend that you search for tutorials here on NG and then check out the one with the highest grade then youll see what you lack. better luck next time .. as they say third time is the charm

Loved it

You almost caought the flashback feeling in the game, well i like it it was verey nice to se your work and originalety in this :P well the teqnuice you used isnt original but it was verey nicely done, i liked the Max payne story telling it added to the atmosphere, and i think you should make another game like this maybe try working on the possibilety to actually need to jump and stuff like that, maybe even get a second weapon you know.... wel nice work none the less

I liked it alot

The melody is nice and it sounds clean. Dont know what else i can say, there isnt much imo that can improve it ^^good work

well...

Its an interesting piece no doubt about that. but the whole main finger play is a bit well dosnt fit in imo its abit to loud and to ... odd in comparison to the background. other then that its good

i do recognize this

it reminds me of a sing i cant remember the name but the build up is as this one soft in the begining then turning pretty rough in the end and then soft again at the end to melow out, i like it. allthough i would like to se more advanced "finger play" in the middle/end before the last soft part